once apon a time there was a child playing in the park until a guy started ruining toward her.
the girl was frightened because she couldn't run fast so she knew she wasn't getting away.
when the guy came up to her she Finlay screamed HELP! and the guy said "Wat's wrong"?
'i thought you were going to heart me". no I'm won of you're parents friends. oh. I'm here to take you home. OK the girl said. when they got home the girls parents came ruining out. oh my baby!
i was walking in the park when i saw her swinging on the swings. i was just playing mommy. i know but you didn't ask if you could go. I'll ask next time. THE END
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Saturday, November 14, 2009
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A future writer!! Keep writing and don't ever give up! I love your stories. You may be a famous writer one day.
ReplyDeleteI like your story. I think kids should never go places with a stranger. Even when a stranger says they know your mom and dad!
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